Eternal Darkness

December 4, 2009

... in the darkness by =aphostol

A night without you
feels like eternal darkness

The storm of the century
blasting
in my mind, my heart
wondering
where you are

A night without you
feels like eternal darkness

The wind whispers
murmurs
unspoken words
listening
where you are

A night without you
is eternal darkness

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2 Responses to “Eternal Darkness”

  1. Salaam Says:

    This reminds me of nights I used to get worried when my partner went out partying with her friends. You’ve captured that worry perfectly here, and the repetition works really well.

  2. gargoylesroost Says:

    This is beautiful, Thaleia! I love the cadence, and you’ve captured the feeling wonderfully.


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