Eternal Darkness
December 4, 2009
A night without you
feels like eternal darkness
The storm of the century
blasting
in my mind, my heart
wondering
where you are
A night without you
feels like eternal darkness
The wind whispers
murmurs
unspoken words
listening
where you are
A night without you
is eternal darkness
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December 28, 2009 at 10:39 pm
This reminds me of nights I used to get worried when my partner went out partying with her friends. You’ve captured that worry perfectly here, and the repetition works really well.
February 9, 2010 at 10:40 pm
This is beautiful, Thaleia! I love the cadence, and you’ve captured the feeling wonderfully.